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Need Help Coming up with a Slogan for House Cleaning Ad

I will be adversiting in my daughter's preschool's yearbook for my house cleaning. I obviously will be catering to parents and I was thinking about "Busy Beth's house cleaning" but I don't know. It just doesn't seem catchy enough or something. Any suggestions? Maybe something about helping mom? Her school is a little "well to do" so I really want to get the word out to get some business.

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Not Harder-Just Smarter
You may borrow mine as I am retired after 31 years of cleaning in Arlington. Good Luck!

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Your Muss, Our Fuss
Your Extra Set of Arms
House Maid Clean (name not slogan)

Wasn't sure if this is your business name or a slogan, so most of these are slogans.

So, whatever your name is, then add "giving you that extra hour in your day!" Cause if I had an extra hour or two, I'd clean my own house, ya know? :)

Warning, following are cheesy and written before coffee with a 5 month old on my lap, but you get my drift!

"Time for you to take a break?
Let Beth clean for goodness sake!"

"House a mess? Have a seat!
It's up to Beth to make it neat."

"Dishes piled, clothes thrown about?
This house is so messy, I'm gonna shout!
Oh no! Was that a mouse?
Time to let Beth come clean your house!"

Good luck!

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Not Harder-Just Smarter
You may borrow mine as I am retired after 31 years of cleaning in Arlington. Good Luck!

Don't have time for the grime....

Busy Beth's honestly sounds like you might be too busy to help me. How about "Busy Mom's House Help" or something that makes me think you can help ME.

Good luck!
L.

Personally, I want my house to be "pampered", not necessarily cleaned. There is a certain amount of luxury involved in it for me. When I come home and walk into a clean house, it's like a revitalizing spa experience. I want it to smell nice, look nice, and feel nice, and in turn, it makes me feel good.

Busy Beth or Busy Bethy might sound a little... busy. When I think busy, I think stress. I definitely don't need more stress, and most moms don't!!

I think something a bit more luxury sounding would be better, but not too hollywood, because you don't want people to think they can't afford you.

Sweeping Beauty House Cleaning

Mother's Helper

that's for the headline. I'm in advertising. The mistake that so many people make is using their name as their headline. Of course you need to have you name in there, but you want to address the issue first. Whatever you go with just make sure that you shout out your solution.

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